Review Detail of Cvpro in Reincarnated As The Strongest Ancestor With a System

Hey,... the novel has decent start, however, found the following issues ( which others may not find )... 1. Language too casual for a xianxia setting....like people giving call, use of babe, honey, using fork and knife... this may fit in a novel in another genre, but found it difficult to accept in this genre. 2. The MC is too casual. All the women in the story are just because the MC could fuck them 3. Just because it is R 18+ does not mean a sex chapter after 10 -15 chapters ( many a times even less). There has to be some difference compared to a porn novel So dropping it...