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so I guess the Alchemist or rather weapon forgers would use soul to ignite fire, hammer the weapon, quench etc....i am not even sure whether to continue
and what would he call this...pill concocting
ha ha...why do we even have a novel in the first place....the mc can defeat even sovereign without cultivating ..he just has to sigh at the end ...this body
so....no weapon refiner ....artifact refiner...blacksmith... rune smith....but alchemy ?... boy ..hope the story ahead is engaging...
are we going to introduce cellphones and televisions now. The story should have appropriate tags...
Trucks...???? as in they run on petrol /diesel
what is the difference between robbing of cultivation and crippling?
Thank god....it doesn't have 30 - 40 steps...or else he would already be the strongest
where are the spirit stones...
oh...an in-built alarm system
A good grammar may not make a story likable but a bad grammar certainly makes it unlikable
yes...author really needs to work on grammar....
Hey,... the novel has decent start, however, found the following issues ( which others may not find )... 1. Language too casual for a xianxia setting....like people giving call, use of babe, honey, using fork and knife... this may fit in a novel in another genre, but found it difficult to accept in this genre. 2. The MC is too casual. All the women in the story are just because the MC could fuck them 3. Just because it is R 18+ does not mean a sex chapter after 10 -15 chapters ( many a times even less). There has to be some difference compared to a porn novel So dropping it...
are there cell phones now !!! will have to drop as it seems that the author is way too casual with world building
well, the story is well written...kudos for not writing that it english is not your first language and the readers have to put up with it...seeing this a lot lately on webnovel. However, a significant part that keeps us invested (atleast me) is the journey of the character...his struggles, learnings,emotions etc But here, the character is literary led by nose by the system and then a creature who incubated within the mc...even the initial mystry is something everybody knows but is taboo to let the MC know...ridiculously far fetched...and then this is combined with some wierd system features ( eg. skills/stats) which are then converted as per whims... Hence i quit. But this could have been a great story...
Hey,...you have repeated this so many times. We all know from the first time that he is someone powerful and important.