Definitely unique on the origin on the MC, I like the link to Tom, and the retcon to the hp universe to include the Marvel one was very natural. The story just started so not much is fleshed out yet but I do look forward to that. The MC is a card board cut out, cliche, selfish MC you find in 95% of Fanfics. He starts saying he'll NEVER use his powers for others. Red flag and a bold statement, thinking there isn't one person that could change his mind. He claims he wants to be free yet shackles himself. He hides behind a mask, is impatient with young and old people, and keeps a slight temper in check. which again very cliche. anything that might be perceived as helping others is explained that it is all self serving. Cliche. you'd think going to hogwarts could energize you for days but no, the MC was falling asleep after 30 mins from boredom. However, if these shackles are removed and his perspective grows then this could be an awesome chance of character growth through out the story. Everything else is top quality. cept maybe referring to prefects as perfects. overall worth the read.
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