Worldbuilding is pretty good, But my main problem is I hate the mc because sounds like a predator when talking about his 10-year-old sister.
It's decently funny and enjoyable to read.
hehe I see actually he is just a little overprotective of his sister and it's due to his back story, the later chapters will reveal it, and I think the 4th chapter will make it pretty clear.. it sure isn't going where u thought😂😂