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Astrix-Ancient lands

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Lesen Sie den Roman Astrix-Ancient lands des Autors Heavenly_Cloud, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.With the descent of the ancient lands everything will change. How the professions used to be, how the powers come. With the descent, only skills matter.No one will be unbeatableNew powersNewfound weal...

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With the descent of the ancient lands everything will change. How the professions used to be, how the powers come. With the descent, only skills matter. No one will be unbeatable New powers Newfound wealth Newfound path Everyone will have their own unique path to power. With the infinite potential of Earth each earthling will be special. But why did the ancient lands descended? What was the purpose? Was the power the only thing they would bring or was despair waiting? Would they provide infinite opportunities or be a plunderer who wanted to plunder earth? [Caution: each character has its own background story. Reader is advised to not too bond to too much with the characters. None of the consequences will be author’s responsibility] Each character will have its own role, and each of them has their own personality. Weird things can be explained by their own hidden background. This is not for faint hearted, as even lead characters can face death. Read at your own risk. Please remember do not judge the actions at the start. Some simple actions and personality can have major significance and could be an effect of past of the character. The MC will not be OP. He will have his own path along which he will develop. Other lead characters will play a significant role in development. //Check the chapter comments of chapter 2,4 and 6 respectively for their character templates. The art is not made by me. //

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Einstaral_pearl
Einstaral_pearlLv2Einstaral_pearl

To be honest the novel has quite potential , just wish that author doesn't drop it or ruin the flow😅, also quite a difference in quality could be seen as chapter progress

CalmDaoistLee
CalmDaoistLeeLv14CalmDaoistLee

The story is structured quite well, and the dialog is attention grabbing. It seems if the people in the book are really there. Other than that the book has no grammar issues that I can see, so that makes the story quite easy to read which adds to the want to progress deeper into the book.

leoreview1
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T1me_2_Dr1nkBl3ach
T1me_2_Dr1nkBl3achLv1T1me_2_Dr1nkBl3ach

Worldbuilding is pretty good, But my main problem is I hate the mc because sounds like a predator when talking about his 10-year-old sister. It's decently funny and enjoyable to read.

Sakshi_4401
Sakshi_4401Lv1Sakshi_4401

It was quite good , good storyline ,had a lot of fun while reading it.............................................................................

Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Lv14Night_Crawler619

ohhkayyy now that we're 5 chapters in I think it's time to review the story so far The writing improved a lot in just 3 chapters. The story is well thought and the premise is yet to set in but the thing we could all agree on is that the story have potential. Characters are still being introduced but I liked the detailed description so far. Story is developing at a good phase. Here is my 5 star for now, KEEP IT UP AUTHOR 🥰 Will update the review after few more chapters.

Lancee
LanceeLv1Lancee

There is still much unknown, I'd like to know the plot, where the story leads. Is there any force that the main character is supposed to overcome and if so how will he do it and is the force so big that it plays a huge role on the direction of the storyline. So far the story development is blurry but since it's only three chapters it might show itself. But the use of dialogue is pretty good, there is space to grow. Overall a story with potential.

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