Review Detail of dscot345 in New World Magic System in Asoiaf

I wanna like your story and I do like it. It is interesting to see magic being openly used and I think that’s kind of cool he said of a lot of other stories that have magic kind of hidden in the background or slightly used. but but your character is so naïve. Maybe this is just a au Game of Thrones where everyone in the north are honest and willing to work together. This is a medieval world you’re writing about even in the North politics and plotting. No noble Lord is going to allow some upstart to gain power and land in his territory. What he’ll do Is maybe listen to you tell him all about his powers and all the things you can do and then murder you take your children as servants to gain that power. In the books you don’t hear a lot about politics in the north as much and it seems like north is all together but I think a lot of it is because Ned is just an idiot and he doesn’t see what’s going around him.