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Why not just use Genjutsu on him. Isn’t that Orochimaru weakness? Because he messed with his soul.

Good story so far enjoy your main character personality. I also like stories with an overpower MC. Hiruzen Sarutobi is a joke. His greatest achievement was leading his friends to run away while his teacher is slaughtered. I think he believes in all the hypes that he’s built upon himself. Not saying that he is not knowledgeable, but he’s had access to all of the clans knowledge from the village to help build his skills. Even with that, he’s not that impressive. He’s a great manipulator and propagandist. I think he even put shame on Dumbledore in his ability to manipulate. I kinda hope Hiruzen will get beat pretty badly and run back to the village with his tail between his legs.

Isn’t it amazing how Jiraiya can’t see any fault in his actions and even when talking about how Danzo killed Yahiko he plays it off as an accident. As far as he understands his teachers, best friend murdered Yahiko. When Nagato asked him multiple times to leave him alone, his response was to grab him. I know we’re supposed to like him because he was the only one connected to his father that actually helped Naruto.I’ve always kind of found him a pathetic character. He’s always chasing the child of prophecy. He doesn’t do much to improve the Naruto universe. Also didn’t the prophecy say that he would be the savior or the destroyer of the ninja world?

For a village who preaches the will of fire Hyuga is a extremely disgusting family aren’t they? The Hyuga enslaved their own siblings. How could anyone truly trust them.

So how is the monkey going to play it? He can’t allow his boyfriend fighting the mist to not achieve any merit. He also knows his one eyed lover can’t hold off the mist. So will he order Kazane to report to Danzo. So Danzo can leach off Kazane achievement. If things go wrong, they can blame it on Kazane.

I’m not disagreeing with what you’re saying, but what I’m saying is if Naruto got the same amount of assistance as Sasuke. As well as have the same access to training manual. If he was taught how to refine his chakra at a young age like Sasuke. He would have dominated the ninja world before he even went on the training trip.

Yeah, without Naruto, this team is going to suck. I’m assuming without Naruto there Sakura is gonna die pretty soon. Also, he can just fail and not work with them and don’t tell me he accidentally works with them. It is kind of annoying that he has an adult mind but he was screwing around in school. Has he done anything other than schoolwork to prove himself privately?.

Why is he giving his time to these two useless characters? I just dislike both of them, but I despise Itachi. How many babies and toddler throats do you think Itachi slit. I wonder if they smiled at him as he leaned over there cradle, seeing a familiar family face before he drew his knife across their neck. You can dress it up as much as you want, but he’s one of the most despicable characters in Naruto. Personally, I would love for somebody to slice Sasuke throat in front of him.

He can’t be Hokage. He’s not following the line of succession. You have to be a student of Hokage. Maybe in the future after the fifth Hokage there’s hope but under these decrepit old schemers there’s no way he’ll get that position. If he starts believing that his talent and skill and his contribute to the village gives him the right to be Hokage. Then he forgot the lessons of what happened to the white fang.

Good story I like your main character. No I don’t know exactly how mc is going to fleece this cripple. Does he have anything valuable left? Maybe some chakra metal. The second sword.