the writing is good but the mc all way make The same mistakes never learn her lesson like she know she not strong enough and how did she not died one she always face super strong opoonent and she always got captured and the story it keep putting more information down that im so confused. P.s i like the writing style maybe make the mc smarter Because she always weak and still went in and fight just to be Captured also dont Threw the information left and right. And thank you
Enderchronos
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MÖGENIndeed it has, though this story was mostly a learning opportunity for me. I'll finish it later but I'm working on other stories for now. Read this if you don't mind a work in progress. Otherwise, I'm currently working on another story called The Reign of The Reawakened Wyrm. Have a rapturous day!
BrabbitX:has it bee changed? because no1 likes reading about an mc that makes the same mistakes over n over again.
has it bee changed? because no1 likes reading about an mc that makes the same mistakes over n over again.
Enderchronos:Everything before The Starved Python Of The East is unedited, and will be changed later by the way.