Critical reader.
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1996
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:D I give up, you are too stupid to even have a conversation with.
again, read what i wrote, it has nothing to do with MCs thoughts.
Mine will be worse, thats why I would never create one :D You really are pretty dumb. Thats like asking people who didn't like a movie "well make a better movie then!" :D smh.
True, maybe in a couple of years you will produce something readable, good luck, practice helps.
again, you are responding with nonsense.
are you stupid? What are you replying to? Nothing I said has anything to do with MC thinking in anyway. It's clear you are stupid, no wonder this whole story is stupid and writing is bad. I know i sound harsh, but seriously, reread what I wrote and explain to me what you are responding to.
some1 who knows royal etiquette but doesnt know what a date is? ok
this is so stupid. no questions about how mc beat so many wolves. Then they insist she is injured when she isn't. Then they think she is scared... this is so very dumb, just what i would expect from a yuri but still.
Facts. We need to call FBI, lily assaulted the 15 year old girl.
way too forced. It's clear the writing is low level if this is how you get MC in trouble so that they can show/learn their power. Really, so absent minded she walked into a forest while thinking.. c mon thats just way too stupid.