Review Detail of NeonixUS in MarKed

Writing this review after reading chapter 25, So minor spoiler warning. One of the better stories on the platform but I do have a few critiques. The Author has done a really good job at hooking me to the book by establishing a mystery, and although some have criticized for lack ‘exposition’ per say, I really like the limited 1st person perspective of Benji. Besides that, the magic system seem unique and interesting. The world building is quite good as well (this is one of the most important parts). Sociatal systems have been established that Benji will likely be a part of in the future. Benji’s parent and the details of these system add to that mystery of something bigger However, up until now, plot wise, things have been somewhat slow. Benji’s establishment in the school has been interesting but so far also reads like a slice of life, mainly focusing on Benji and Kate’s relationship, while sidelining a ‘main’ plot. I feel this could be done better. I would also enjoy to see the use of other perspectives, giving you other option for world building, plot devices, and character development. Also possibly fixing some issues exposition issues others have mentioned. Overall, its been a pleasent read so far. The story and world building making me want to read nothing but more. I hope the Author continues to update and write. Looking forward to future work.