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MarKed

Autor: Mepo
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What is MarKed

Lesen Sie den Roman MarKed des Autors Mepo, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.Benji has recently been accepted into one of the three prestigious Academies of Adventurers and Elites. He's nervous about it all but eager to make friends. A new school life of training and magic awa...

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Benji has recently been accepted into one of the three prestigious Academies of Adventurers and Elites. He's nervous about it all but eager to make friends. A new school life of training and magic awaits him, but he can feel the stares. Heck, he can practically hear the question on everyone's mind: 'What's that mark on his face?' ———————————————— !!!UPDATES!!! [RESTRUCTURING CHAPTERS {19-34}] Super busy with my job, school, and well life so once again please bear with the slow updates. I've started the process of correcting some things and adding the arc I skipped. I'm a more confident writer now so please look forward to the new content! The chapters being work shopped are [18-34] so kindly ignore those please ;p. A new cover will mark the completion of this process. [It has begun] Saturday is the day I try to post, but I may drop a chapter a day or two later. -v- Oh and count on me not dropping this story it's my very first after all so I'll write it to its end >;) ———————————————— Credits Thank you Lapiz for the amazing cover art! Please go check them out if you like what you see. Their name is blacklapiz on Fiverr. They have an Instagram too so give that a follow @blacklapizuu Thank you Baxtli for the wonderful sketch used for my christmas thank you. Go check them out on Fiverr. Their name is baxtli. ———————————————— [Me] Hello, Dear reader, I'm Oliver Mepo, but you can call me Mepo. As you already know this is my story "MarKed". I aspired to be a writer for some time now, and yet I never had a work of mine seen by actual readers. So I decided to comb through my library of ideas, and put one out there. Call this my punch to the sky. Hoping this works at least a little. Heck if this blows up I might become a full-blown writer. So please let me know what you think. Tips on how to improve or polish my writing are appreciated more than you may know. I'm a newbie, but I do hope you'll stick around to see how "MarKed" unfolds.

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MiuNovels
MiuNovelsLv13MiuNovels

this book is clearly well written and took its pace to explain little bit at a time. the development is slow pace and the sentences ran smooth. the only thing I'll probably comment are dialogues cause its jumbled witht the others. it gets confusing sometimes on who was talking or acting out cause they're in the same paragraph. i suggest break the paragraph per charcter [img=recommend] overall its a nice read. keep updating and writting [img=recommend]

Cynthia_Sandridge
Cynthia_SandridgeLv1Cynthia_Sandridge

Writing quality, character design and story development is engaging. Looking forward to reading more about the training and missions that take place at the academy. Recommend!

Apprentice4
Apprentice4Lv5Apprentice4

The prologue was quite confusing but it did manage to rope my interest in. The first few chapters I read really set this novel apart from more of this genre. After a certain time, everyone gets bored of the same tropes and plots, what makes any work special is the attention to detail that is given, and both during character interactions and worldbuilding, author has paid great attention to detail. I especially like the pacing because the plot and the story is moving at a pretty good pace while also using just the right amount of exposition to rope a readers interest. Good luck to the author, will be following this from now on.

stoneclauss
stoneclaussLv12stoneclauss

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Cultureshock_poet
Cultureshock_poetLv1Cultureshock_poet

Marked is one of the hidden gems you rarely get the chance to read, but once you do, you realise how much of beast it is. The story is filled with lovely and likeable characters. The prologue was a bit hard for me to get a hold of, but after that I just lost myself in the story. The world building is impressive. The author has put a lot of thought into opening the world to the reader and planning interactions of characters with the world and other characters. Most of the interactions feel natural, though there were some which felt a little out of place, but that's just me nitpicking. The story has still a long way to go but for now, it's definitely worth a read. All the best! Keep Writing!

Liltoy
LiltoyLv1Liltoy

Marked is a slow burn of a story with nice sprinkles of action often enough to keep you entertained. There are hints to a larger world we haven't yet been shown, but the world so far and the build so far are enough for me to say Marked is heading toward some interesting horizons. I'd like more updates, but aside from that you've got a nice little story here author. Keep it up.

NeonixUS
NeonixUSLv14NeonixUS

Writing this review after reading chapter 25, So minor spoiler warning. One of the better stories on the platform but I do have a few critiques. The Author has done a really good job at hooking me to the book by establishing a mystery, and although some have criticized for lack ‘exposition’ per say, I really like the limited 1st person perspective of Benji. Besides that, the magic system seem unique and interesting. The world building is quite good as well (this is one of the most important parts). Sociatal systems have been established that Benji will likely be a part of in the future. Benji’s parent and the details of these system add to that mystery of something bigger However, up until now, plot wise, things have been somewhat slow. Benji’s establishment in the school has been interesting but so far also reads like a slice of life, mainly focusing on Benji and Kate’s relationship, while sidelining a ‘main’ plot. I feel this could be done better. I would also enjoy to see the use of other perspectives, giving you other option for world building, plot devices, and character development. Also possibly fixing some issues exposition issues others have mentioned. Overall, its been a pleasent read so far. The story and world building making me want to read nothing but more. I hope the Author continues to update and write. Looking forward to future work.

Little_Foxxy
Little_FoxxyLv12Little_Foxxy

Marked has its balance, dialogue and monologue put pretty nice. That's what makes stories fun to read. As of its pacing, it could be slow to some people but to me it's already stable, I didn't trip nor yawn. Recommended. Keep on writing, story must be told

Myread1
Myread1Lv2Myread1

Nice.

et_cetera
et_ceteraLv3et_cetera

Great start and promising plot! I like the pacing and how this story is narrated! Keep it up author![img=update][img=recommend]

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