Review Detail of PaleUnity in Demon Jaeger

There is little actual world building as of chapter one, however there is splendid character designs and the desperation of the MC is clearly felt. There is marvelous foreshadowing and the story flows smoothly, however the little bumps that happen are primarily due to grammar or verb tense issues. Overall, it is a wonderful novel, and I would ABSOLUTELY recommend this. Splendid work