MagneBP666

Definitely a good read, the descriptions are on point and never gets boring to read. The story isn't dull at all and quite intriguing! Good job!

Wow, the chapter is so well described and it never really gets boring! I'll definitely keep reading

Ability orbs cost money ^^

The book is intriguing and immersive from the start! It gives off a good vibe and you could easily spend the entire day reading it. I would say that if you like the tags, you should really read it!

Writing could use some check... but other than that, the story has a good flow and interesting plot! At last I would suggest you reading it if you like the tags :)

I'm confused as to the writing... It has mistakes here and there but nothing that makes it unreadable or the sorts, but despite that, the author still describes and immerses the reader successfully!

+1 for banan AHAHA!

Okay... so the only reason it's not a 5-star review is because the chaps are so short, I am unaware about whether the newer chapters are longer or the same but 500 words per chap are just too short for me. WITH THAT BEING SAID! This novel is wonderful quality! The Author does a great job at describing, and it's easy to follow what is happening! You should read if you like the tags!

The quality of the writing is very good, and there are no grammatical flaws that annoys you when you read. The only thing that could be done better is the stability of updates. I know the chapters are long but maybe cut them down and update more ^^

The author's own style of writing is fantastic and really immersive! It is a bit fast-paced at the start but I find that really well working as you quickly get introduced to the new world! Totally a must read