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Sarath_Veda
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2021-10-30 23:13

It started off really good [ OP Mc, Arrogant Mc, Cruel and ruthless but not a psycopath]. But, there was not a much of plot line or any twists or surprises in story. He saves some important people [to control them] and helps them. If enemy were strong, he uses arrays to hide then cultivates in short period and then kills the enemy.---- this scene repeats itself again and again. Story was extremely focused on MC, that after 70 or 80 Chapters it becomes so boring. Even then there miniscule dialogues for MC, They are 'they are ants', 'just you', 'what can you do' like these. My review is only upto ch158. Maybe it was better later, I Hope.

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𝕀𝕟𝕥𝕣𝕠 Hello author-nim! I am here with a seriously thought out review, as I believe it is given time I review the story. This story is probably one of my favorites. Although this story is one of my favorites, I will not just give a brainless review with 5-stars. This review consists of my real views and tips/advice on how this story could be improved for future readers reading experiences. 𝕎𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 ℚ𝕦𝕒𝕝𝕚𝕥𝕪 In my opinion the author's grammar, punctuation and word forming could be greatly improved. A lot of sentences are either missing words or worded terribly. Sometimes irrelevant sentences are put together instead of being seperated with a full stop. Originally I was going to give a 3-star for writing quality. However, because it wasn't completely unreadable, I gave it a 4-star. 𝕊𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕪 𝔻𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕝𝕠𝕡𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕥 For story development, I decided to rate it a 5-star. So far, from what I have read. The story development is good, it isn't too fast paced and it explains quite a few things. It shows the main character's process of returning to the same power of his previous life. The storyline/plot is very interesting and entertaining. I thoroughly enjoyed read this story so far. ℂ𝕙𝕒𝕣𝕒𝕔𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝔻𝕖𝕤𝕚𝕘𝕟 Character design, 2-star! Why? 1. There was almost no introduction to the main character at the beginning of the story. 2. Barely any explanation was made about his past life and history/background. 3. It was also unclear whether his name was the same as his current life in the past (I had to clarify with the author on this topic). 𝕌𝕡𝕕𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕊𝕥𝕒𝕓𝕚𝕝𝕚𝕥𝕪 I give the updating stability a 5-star. The author updates quite often. Most of the time 2 chapters are uploaded in one update. I am very satisfied with the upload times and chapters. 𝕎𝕠𝕣𝕝𝕕 𝔹𝕒𝕔𝕜𝕘𝕣𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕕 World background is fairly decent. Although not much is explained in the beginning. I let it slide as the world background is later explained in more detail. 4-stars for world background. 𝕆𝕦𝕥𝕣𝕠 Hopefully author-nim doesn't find this review too harsh...(• ▽ •;) 𝕋𝕠𝕥𝕒𝕝 ℝ𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕖𝕨 4-stars

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