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chevar28
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2021-02-25 12:10

Its Pretty good. In the beginning there was some problems understanding it but later on i got disappointed because the name is misleading . He is only a demon god king in name.(forgot what his title is) He could ended the other five familes already to get rid of his problems so he can focus on cultivation. Too arrogant as well and has some cliches as well. Thought this novel was going to different but I lost interest . Its a good read but its just not my taste

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𝕀𝕟𝕥𝕣𝕠 Hello author-nim! I am here with a seriously thought out review, as I believe it is given time I review the story. This story is probably one of my favorites. Although this story is one of my favorites, I will not just give a brainless review with 5-stars. This review consists of my real views and tips/advice on how this story could be improved for future readers reading experiences. 𝕎𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 ℚ𝕦𝕒𝕝𝕚𝕥𝕪 In my opinion the author's grammar, punctuation and word forming could be greatly improved. A lot of sentences are either missing words or worded terribly. Sometimes irrelevant sentences are put together instead of being seperated with a full stop. Originally I was going to give a 3-star for writing quality. However, because it wasn't completely unreadable, I gave it a 4-star. 𝕊𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕪 𝔻𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕝𝕠𝕡𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕥 For story development, I decided to rate it a 5-star. So far, from what I have read. The story development is good, it isn't too fast paced and it explains quite a few things. It shows the main character's process of returning to the same power of his previous life. The storyline/plot is very interesting and entertaining. I thoroughly enjoyed read this story so far. ℂ𝕙𝕒𝕣𝕒𝕔𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝔻𝕖𝕤𝕚𝕘𝕟 Character design, 2-star! Why? 1. There was almost no introduction to the main character at the beginning of the story. 2. Barely any explanation was made about his past life and history/background. 3. It was also unclear whether his name was the same as his current life in the past (I had to clarify with the author on this topic). 𝕌𝕡𝕕𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕊𝕥𝕒𝕓𝕚𝕝𝕚𝕥𝕪 I give the updating stability a 5-star. The author updates quite often. Most of the time 2 chapters are uploaded in one update. I am very satisfied with the upload times and chapters. 𝕎𝕠𝕣𝕝𝕕 𝔹𝕒𝕔𝕜𝕘𝕣𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕕 World background is fairly decent. Although not much is explained in the beginning. I let it slide as the world background is later explained in more detail. 4-stars for world background. 𝕆𝕦𝕥𝕣𝕠 Hopefully author-nim doesn't find this review too harsh...(• ▽ •;) 𝕋𝕠𝕥𝕒𝕝 ℝ𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕖𝕨 4-stars

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