Review Detail of herramaether in Gender Genesis: Chance in a different gender.

I love the characters [although I can't say I agree with their characters], and I do love the world background. But if I have to be harsh, the way the king speaks and the way Harrison speaks is a bit too... casual and unbefitting a subject. It just doesn't fit the mood; I would suggest the author to make the king's words more formal and Harrison's words and expressions more respectful. The author also has to watch out for improper word usage and grammatical errors i.e. tense errors. Otherwise, the plotline seems very sound thus far. Keep going, author!