No, thank you! I'm not taking any publishing offers for now, but I'll keep this in mind.

Thank you for your feedback🖤 I'm working on more chapters now at the moment :D

😂Oh yes.

The more you enjoy yourself the faster time flies

I know... just a few more decades...

If you can...

Thanks😄 I try my best.

I love the interesting PoV. It’s rare to find well-structured books with a 2nd PoV, but this author has managed to captivate me successfully. However, I would suggest for the author to utilise the show-not-tell technique more often. Otherwise, I do have to admit I have fallen in love with Rin, Daisuke, and Paris, and I found chapter 10 rather romantic to read. Would I stick around for chapter 11? Definitely.

Thank you! I really love Yulia Krysovenko as well :)

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Pavlova cakes actually do exist lol :D Besides, it's a fictional world. Anything can happen, eh? :)

How do I put this? I find them very enchanting and interesting to analyze. Maybe it's just me but I feel like there are quite a few facets to their personalities.

The plotline is good and the characters are very… unusual. The author needs to watch out for minor spelling errors, preposition issues and slightly improper tense usage, however [basically grammatical errors in general]. If you haven’t already, I would suggest getting someone else to proofread your work, so that you can be sure your work is with as few mistakes as possible [or you can take the time to read your story from the first chapter to the latest each time you post a new chapter, so that you can be sure your story flows smoothly WITH as few mistakes as possible in between]. Keep up the good work, author! P.S I love the plot twist in Chapter 2; thought it was gonna be a normal transmigration story~

So Izekiel punched Eugene's fist?

It'd be nicer if you showed Eugene is the male lead character instead of outright saying it. I don't like this paragraph, tbh

I love the characters [although I can't say I agree with their characters], and I do love the world background. But if I have to be harsh, the way the king speaks and the way Harrison speaks is a bit too... casual and unbefitting a subject. It just doesn't fit the mood; I would suggest the author to make the king's words more formal and Harrison's words and expressions more respectful. The author also has to watch out for improper word usage and grammatical errors i.e. tense errors. Otherwise, the plotline seems very sound thus far. Keep going, author!

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I swear, Annabelle is the only character that I've met that has caught me way off-guard... the author is brilliant in how she/he has designed the characters, but needs to watch out for grammatical and word choice issues. Otherwise, a brilliant and surefire read!

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I shoulda made her 2.1m~