I love myself a good fantasy story, and this here is the main example as for why I love fantasy. This was a really great read, honestly I couldn't stop scroling down to see what would happen next and all that was thanks to, the world, the setting and the characters that make this story even better! As for the mistakes I don't like to point them out and honestly I was having so much fun reading that I only noticed when I read the other 2 reviews (at the time of writing this) but worry not, we all do mistakes and with time you will get better at this so keep going! So all in all it was a great read, really enjoyable and I will be coming back for more so keep them coming Author!
YoruOtreu
Liked it!
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