Good story. I really like the characters and the story, it sort of reminds me of an anime. You can tell you enjoy writing. There are a few mistakes here and there but it doesn’t really detract from the story. Keep working hard!
Shionokami
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MÖGENShionokami:Thank's! It makes me happy that you liked it. And I will try to get better so that I don't do so many mistakes!