Item: Ex-Angel
Rating: 4.8

Nicole_99Lv124yr

2020-08-28 11:06

An interesting story of an angel that rebelled against God, hence, their(coz Angel's are androgynous) banishment to the mortal realm. There were minor grammatical, punctuation and spelling mistakes that could be noted. I suggest not writing so many "and" in a sentence. You could try breaking the sentence. However, the story flow is good and the pacing close to perfection.

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