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ZOALv134yr
2020-09-05 13:04

The first chapter is just great. The description of scenes is also great. I liked the pace and plot of this story. There are just some minor grammatical mistakes and I had suggest to upgrade your synopsis a little bit. Other than that awesome story.... Looking forward to it....

Ex-Angel

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4.7
10 Chs

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Dingoa
DingoaLv2

This is a fun story to sit back and let yourself get involved in. There's some humor. Good suspense. Good action. If you're a fan of magical beings and objects, you'll like this story. There are some questions posed in the beginning that have been answered by the end of chapter 5, and some new questions posed that have yet to be elaborated on. That's exactly what you want to do, since it keeps people hooked. Keep it up.

4yr

Diamond_Air
Diamond_AirLv10

Love this novel XD Especially the mc, his attitude is just perfect. You're doing a great job author, you just have minor grammar errors and you should be good once you fix them. Great work author, keep it up XD

3yr
Mister_Op
Mister_OpLv5

The story seems interesting enough. Characters appear real, and as I read, I could even imagine every action of the MC. It looks promising but we'll need to read more chapters to be sure. Apart from some grammar errors, I found no mistakes! Good job to the author for making such an interesting read!

4yr
WhisperP3N
WhisperP3NLv2

It's a rocky opening that leads to something that could be promising and grow in coming chapters. The flow is good, detailed well, and characters are at the most need the much needed attention. And that happens, this story is going to be soaring.

4yr
nKaneis
nKaneisLv3

Aside from a few grammatical errors , nothing that can't be fixed,this novel has serious potential . I definitely recommend this to those who likes mythical and religious novels . I'll be waiting for more !

4yr
Ying_
Ying_Lv12

This story has potential! The structure of the world is very well done! Our MC is a fallen angel cast to the mortal world and goes into an adventure as an OP character!

4yr
Nicole_99
Nicole_99Lv12

An interesting story of an angel that rebelled against God, hence, their(coz Angel's are androgynous) banishment to the mortal realm. There were minor grammatical, punctuation and spelling mistakes that could be noted. I suggest not writing so many "and" in a sentence. You could try breaking the sentence. However, the story flow is good and the pacing close to perfection.

4yr
SamsaraWithWords
SamsaraWithWordsLv14

Good so far! I only wish there was more. This world setting is right up my alley, with religion, mythical, and supernatural elements. If that is your thing then give this a read!

4yr
Black_Rabbit_Oz
Black_Rabbit_OzLv11

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