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Sage_HiddenBear
Sage_HiddenBearLv65yr
2019-10-16 11:03

Really not sure how this story has such a high rating. It is honestly a perfect showcase of everything wrong with the novels written on this website. I understand that folks cannot find good fanfiction. Have you all tried spacebattles or fanfic dot net? Even Archive of our own has some good stuff. Just this is not one of them. Perhaps read that Kyuubi fanfic that is on here in which someone is reincarnated as Kyuubi no Kitsune from Naruto and starts off imprisoned in Kushina. That one is well written.

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hope123612
hope123612Author

Sorry for making you read this ****, really sorry...it's my first writing, so i don't care if people call it ****...you know even I am thinking how I got this much rating🤔....

Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

You should get better at names. I dropped the story as soon as I saw the names Hope and Quatz. You wouldn't read a book full of names like Billy Bob or Leroy would you?

hope123612:Sorry for making you read this ****, really sorry...it's my first writing, so i don't care if people call it ****...you know even I am thinking how I got this much rating🤔....
senkii
senkiiLv6

Hello, what kyuubin fanfict title?

HellSingFang
HellSingFangLv13

The White Demon Fox. It's a decent one... (you see people plotting against the MC behind his back and MC is like "I totally trust them to not screw me"

senkii:Hello, what kyuubin fanfict title?
Sage_HiddenBear
Sage_HiddenBearLv6

The story is posted here on Webnovel and is called "The White Demon Fox". Really, its very well written.

senkii:Hello, what kyuubin fanfict title?
DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

Have to disagree on the character development tho... the mc has such an odd... fascination towards naruto(naruko) and that made me drop it. Honestly got really annoying as it seemed like he was addicted to her or something.

Sage_HiddenBear:The story is posted here on Webnovel and is called "The White Demon Fox". Really, its very well written.
Hokonoso
HokonosoLv13

ppl congregate here because archive of our own and fanfic dot net are nothing but 90% slash fics, sure there are some good ones, but most ppl here are trying to escape slash fics! Also they rarely have any male OC/SI stories where they are a huge portion of the stories here (at least the non romance ones anyways). And spacebattles is good, better than the others, but even T rated fics there get banned... that can be very annoying for an ***** reading as it ruins immersion heavily. Still a good site though.

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4

☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.

Hokonoso:ppl congregate here because archive of our own and fanfic dot net are nothing but 90% slash fics, sure there are some good ones, but most ppl here are trying to escape slash fics! Also they rarely have any male OC/SI stories where they are a huge portion of the stories here (at least the non romance ones anyways). And spacebattles is good, better than the others, but even T rated fics there get banned... that can be very annoying for an ***** reading as it ruins immersion heavily. Still a good site though.
KuroHyoudou
KuroHyoudouLv5

I think it is called reborn as kurama

senkii:Hello, what kyuubin fanfict title?
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

I dropped that story because kurama cursed like a middle schooler that just found out he won't get in trouble for cursing away from home. "You lusted after that wh0re mito's rotten, putrid loose pu$$y, didn't you tobirama?" It's like this every time that he talks to anyone that isn't kushina, mikoto, naruko, sasuke, itachi, mikoto or kushina. Like literally every conversation has 15 curses in it

DaoOfCulture:Have to disagree on the character development tho... the mc has such an odd... fascination towards naruto(naruko) and that made me drop it. Honestly got really annoying as it seemed like he was addicted to her or something.
DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

I dropped it when Kurama won't stop talking about Naruko like some fanatic

Hentai_Senchou:I dropped that story because kurama cursed like a middle schooler that just found out he won't get in trouble for cursing away from home. "You lusted after that wh0re mito's rotten, putrid loose pu$$y, didn't you tobirama?" It's like this every time that he talks to anyone that isn't kushina, mikoto, naruko, sasuke, itachi, mikoto or kushina. Like literally every conversation has 15 curses in it
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KingGrizzly
KingGrizzlyLv10

The grammar was very **** at first and still is, but a little better, however, I find it excruciating to have to continue reading someone who uses "bcoz", "coz", "u" and other text talks phrased. It ruins what little immersion I have in the story. The character interaction is hilarious and my favorite part of the series, especially from Quatz and Hope. I feel like this entire fanfic is a joke and should be treated as a joke as it makes it way more enjoyable to read. At first, I treated it seriously and got frustrated by how stupid it was, but when I saw it as light-hearted comedy fanfic, I enjoyed it way more. However the joke is ruined when the author tries to make it serious, it just doesn't work. To make the fanfic serious the characters and the relationships must first be properly established and make the audience become attached towards them, which I couldn't do, due to thinking that it was a joke the entire time and the fast progression of character relations with no real emotion in them. I found it very interesting when he was in Highschool DxD world, but when he went to Fairy Tail, I just found it slowly plummet as the story tried to make it serious. I just can't get attached to an MC who had a personality change for no reason, which got rid of all my favorites to his character. It's annoying to see an MC who doesn't want to see bad stuff yet continually does bad stuff and does nothing to stop said bad stuff. His character turned to **** is what I'm trying to say. I hate how his emotions are all over the place. There is literally no reason for this at all. It has been stated that he can control his emotions but has not shown control in any of the situations where he needed his control. I'm pretty sure that the reason he cant show his emotions is that he thinks that showing emotion is a weakness. What bull**** is this? Get this mother****ers emotions under control already. Whilst I love Quatz, I kind of hate red. Red is just a helicopter mom and no wants that. Also, what's up with the system? She has been a minor role and has already been forgotten by most of the characters that know of her. She has been pretty much unneeded during the whole fanfic and is rarely used. I liked the interaction between Quatz and Red because of their funny interactions, however, as I kept reading I realized that it's basically Issei and Ddraig with some personality tweaks here and there. They only really change when they reach Fairy Tail which I actually hate due to the MC not being in control of his emotions and acting like this weird peace lover that doesn't want anyone to get hurt, it feels like I'm watching someone who is always on the fence about something and it's frustrating to read. I also think that going to different worlds was a bad idea, I get it, he needs to control his power, however, I feel like going to a place where it's harder to control his power is a horrible idea. It would have been more satisfying to watch him go there when he himself can control his powers and possibly turn into a dragon. Red as a character is ****. I have seen where the author wanted to make some character development moments for Red and Hopes relationship but I thought it was banter at first so it really wasn't emotionally connecting in my mind, more of a rushed and badly done story. I'm gonna end this review here now as I can't be bothered to type anymore and I feel like I have repeated the same stuff over and over again so I'll just give a quick summary of what I hate. The Grammar needs improvement but the author has gotten better, it all went to **** when he went to fairy tail and I feel like the author wanted to make it serious and somewhat dramatic halfway through the story when I thought it was more enjoyable reading it as a comedy, I also thought there were quite a number of inconsistencies in the story so the author might want to go back and re-read or just skim through.

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