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Jlax
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The grammar is bad and there is little to no flow in the story. The worst part is that it feels messy as f*ck. The protagonist's thoughts are f*cking everywhere and so much unecessary things are going on. The first chapter was trash, the author's comments on the paragraphs just took away any form of immersion from me, not that there was much to begin with. There's an author's note section for crying out loud. All in all, if you like to read something that's of relatively low quality then this novel is for you.

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword

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3PoundsOfRice
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In general no novel on this website is of high quality, none at all, I don't say the novels are bad, some quite entertaining, but almost all of these novels are plagued with cliché errors and forced plots. If you want to read something of quality you can read Martin, Rothfuss or Sanderson, besides this is a fanfiction, ie, this written by a person who writes for pleasure, not out of necessity, so naturally will not make his maximum effort to correct his spelling. Note that you only rated the author with a star, but you forgot that you also rate the frequency of publication of chapters, which is very good, but even so you put a star, is so much the displeasure that you felt that you let your anger lead you to give unfair ratings?

Seud
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Even if you’re updating frequently, it doesn’t matter if what you’re writing is complete sh!t

3PoundsOfRice:In general no novel on this website is of high quality, none at all, I don't say the novels are bad, some quite entertaining, but almost all of these novels are plagued with cliché errors and forced plots. If you want to read something of quality you can read Martin, Rothfuss or Sanderson, besides this is a fanfiction, ie, this written by a person who writes for pleasure, not out of necessity, so naturally will not make his maximum effort to correct his spelling. Note that you only rated the author with a star, but you forgot that you also rate the frequency of publication of chapters, which is very good, but even so you put a star, is so much the displeasure that you felt that you let your anger lead you to give unfair ratings?