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Parts of this story are hilarious. There are some absurdist elements due to the nature of the main character's background. I didn't not expect to laugh as much as I did in couple of the chapters. I can't wait to read more in this story.
What a brilliant new story. I'm loving the character and story development. I want more. It's a complicated story with political and powerful characters.
I usually find most HP fanfics to take only a few different forms. This one is quite unique in the world where Nevil is the chosen one. But Harry Potter has his own journey. It's somewhat different.
The story seems fascinating but the writing quality deters from the story and characters. The magic is a problem too. The subject covered doesn't make sense, at least not in the way that the story is told.
Most of the story is excellent. I feel that the character background is a bit lacking. Perhaps it's the lack of clear history for the character. I'd like to see more background and emotional depth.
This is one of the best game system Harry Potter fanfics I've read. The characters, the plot, and the world building are pretty unique. I'm thoroughly enjoying this. It makes me wish I were in such a system.
The story background is quite unique. I've seen other HP and SB stories; this one is quite detailed and provides lots of entertainment. I'm happy to follow this story.
I loved the characters in this piece. The author did a good job in creating original characters and how they interacted with the environment. I had trouble with some of the plot points. But the shortcomings could be overcome.
Excellent premise with a believable world and characters. I like the psychological takes of the main characters. I am hoping that there's more romance as the work goes on.
I find this a rather unique take on Harry Potter's growing up times. As a result, the character development is particularly excellent. /Adding a system and capabilities unique to Harry is quite good. I also love the fact that he is multi-dimentional.