Thank you! I'll write if anyone's reading :)

Thank you for the thoughtful review! I agree. Even the HarryxDraco relationship is rushed a bit. That said, I decided that I wanted them to face their problems while they could also date, so each chapter can feature some negative as well as positive moments, (maybe?) providing a more rewarding read in a chapter-to-chapter format, unlike traditional arcs in novels. It'll be a bit of a writer's challenge for me, but I'm looking forward to it, so I hope it will read okay!