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This has potential i really like his system it is unique good job with the chapters so far
This is interesting I like the inventions and the nation building I guess you can call it that but you have to turn your brain off when it comes to the mc ages and how everyone is just listening to what he says this is average but it is entertaining so I will keep reading. I don’t know about grammar those my brain just ignores mistakes
The eminence of a true king but the author has given it over to this person
Thank you for pointing out my misspelling
Thanks for the chapter
Hope your sister has a happy marriage
Camie mirko ochako
I approve of this story. It has great potential and it’s so much entertaining so far keep up the good work.
This does need a lot of work though, and since I’m not an actual writer, I do not know how to give you accurate advice just saying this so any people who come and trying talk smack about my review understand that I’m just giving my opinion good job on the improvements though
I meant to say 27 chapters