I'll say that some solid yuri you got going on, I'm actually interested to see where this goes, shame that it has just started, I kind of wanted to binge it.

Yeah, about that, y'see, because of personal life matters, I've been releasing the recent chapters once every two weeks, when I sort it out they will be released weekly.

I do like that you have character portraits for the main cast, it actually helps a lot in visualizing them, but having a more detailed explanation of what the characters are thinking and feeling would help a lot to visualize what's going on around them, I hope to see this reaching it's potential.

Okay, okay, the way that you write is actually kind of sick, the exposition may be a bit too much, but that's my only gripe, this premise is so good, hope that it actually reaches its potential.

Thanks, I was writing it while thinking about what it would look like in a visual media like manga/manhwa since the story takes place in an anime style world

I'm conflicted, on one hand It shows that you're really trying with the story and it does have potencial, but on the other hand there are some questionable writing decisions like "Name: What they are saying." I don't know if I could vibe with that, also, It may just be me, but you might be going a little bit too fast with the pacing, again, it might just be me.

An mystery story with three main leads that actually ends up being well-written ? Wow, ok, now that's talent, can't wait to see the potential twists and turns in the future chapters !

Good dialogue and sci-fi ? Sign me the fuck up, always a sucker for an futuristic setting in stories, shame that it's so short right now, can't wait for it to reach it's potencial.

Pretty good, not a lot for me to chew on considering that it's only one chapter, but hey, I can still tell that there's potential. Hope to see more.

Ok, I'll admit, the cover of your novel almost turned off my interest in reading it. But when I actually did I'll say that I was pleasantly surprised by what I read, shame it's still the beginning of the story, but I'll keep my eye open.

Now THIS is a story written by someone who knows what they are doing, the only gripe I have is that it's kind of awkward to read on my phone, but the rest is showing promise !

On one hand, superheroes, always a fan when people take that genre and tries their own take on it, but on the other hand...I'm not sure where I would stand on this whole harem, no-harem debate, but hey I trust you know what you're doing

Okay, pardon the language here for a moment, but, what the hell is wrong with this site ? This is actually really good ! The fact that it only has 300+ views when it has already 20 chapters is criminal ! Can't wait for more

Also, dont worry about the word count, the chapters ramp up on the number of words eventually,

About the cover, yeah, you're right, I know that I should change it, but I'm kind of stumped about what it should be, haven't really decided yet. Now the synopsis...yeah, it's pretty mediocre. And please, you don't need to excuse yourself, this IS my first work, so I should thank you for teaching me this.

Okay, pretty impressive I thought that the whole Isekai genre was getting a tad bit saturated, but this is actually a neat take on it, its a shame that it doesn't have a lot of chapters, but hey, I guess I can wait.

Yep, you got me hooked by chapter 3, and I can tell that this story has the potential to snowball into something great, shame that it's only 7 chapters, but I can wait patiently for more.

Direct, easy to grasp what's going on, this is actually a pretty solid read, shame that it only has three chapters, hopefully, it won't take too long for there to be more.

A historical story that actually manages to capture my attention, now that's a rare combination, crossing my fingers here that it stays consistent !

I'll say, I didn't expected to like it because I usually don't vibe with romance, but I am a sucker for sci-fi, so I gave It a try, and I'll say, you got me, hope to see more from you in the future