This is dope. As someone who isn't immersed in romantic books I ended up wanting to see more of this teenage love play out. Strange way to lose virginity but understandable and mixed with the emotions it is very real. Use of prose is on point with only room to grow, no downsides about the writing style. The plot is simple and yet capturing, I just love it. Thanks author for this, keep going fam.

I smell a setup coming up.

Yep, Al is in love

I like where this is heading

Bad one, nice one. I like what I'm reading

Beautiful story with secrets, plots and emotions .I like it, it's a wonderful story.

Dahlia's soft side is coming out

Finally starting to like Dahlia

Nice, "Stay"

my best chapter so far.

For the first time, I actually find Dahlia suspicious

Dahlia has caught feelings

Watching 👀

I'm not used to this genre but this book is lit. A nice story that catches the audience. The flow is fantastic.Nice one fam.

Story wise I think you have something going on, you have good imagination so I know you definitely got magic. You need some polishing tho, I get confused sometimes because of the grammar and writing style. For the a first timer in this genre, you have got something. I know this is going to be dope going forward.

Man, these angels dumb.😆. They don't know a TV, but it's alright. Let's see how it goes.

It is a nice read, the writing itself is good but the arrangement is a bit off. Seems to be a mixture of science and magic. Can't wait to see where it leads.

I like it. Your writing style is on point. The book moves in a nice pace, it flows well making us want to know what next. I think it is really good so far.

Nah, I'm just flowing with it. Where are you taking us, author?

Nice, this chapter has a nice flow of words.