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ywhy4_4hKommentiertAt this Chung Myung just sighed while Shisui giggled , this scene attracted attention of all 3rd class disciples as everyone knew that Chung Myung's was full of disappointment and Shisui's giggle was sadistic .- ywhy4_4hKommentiert[Anyways, new week new rankings boys! You know what to do! Hurraah!]
- ywhy4_4hAntwortet auf Darkfirephoenix
he is just gauging his power before and after the world travel.
'At this point, I'm confident I can defeat Tai Lung without using the Water Stream Rock Smashing fist.' Leo clenched his fists, feeling his increased strength. - ywhy4_11hAntwortet auf QuanYu
I didn't deny he's handsome but the author repeated and focused on this insignificant part(wasted word count) to the point it became annoying.
As then toji is awaken form his dream, By a blushing air hostess, She says "Excuse me sir, But the plane will be landing soon, Pls tie your seat belt". - ywhy4_17hKommentiertCh 12 Evaluation
- ywhy4_17hAntwortet auf THE_FOOL_
nah bro the bident looks like that cause he fused it with spoilers posiden's weapon after posiden's death
"W-Welcome to Camp Twilight, Son of H-Hades!" - ywhy4_1dAntwortet auf To_m1
beastman is kinda like the word human.
Beastmen with various animal ears and fluffy tails: cat girls, bunny girls, donkey girls, and fox girls. - ywhy4_1dKommentiert
with how weak the mc is, my guess is he would join Hestia family
[Trial Task: Starting today, join the Familia within three days. From the second day after joining, become a Level 2 Adventurer within 50 days, with no upper limit. The higher the level reached by the host, the higher the reward.] - ywhy4_1dAntwortet auf ChadLord
- ywhy4_1dKommentiert
let's see if our mc's word will be true or not.
Reflected in Iris's damp eyes was a handsome, tall boy with blond hair that glistened in the sunlight and vibrant blue eyes. - ywhy4_1dKommentiertCh 29 Tea Party.
- ywhy4_1dKommentiertThroughout these familiar motions, she clung to Yasushi's scarf, finding solace in its presence. She cradled it, her mind lingering on thoughts of him until sleep gently claimed her, his name whispering through her last conscious thoughts.
- ywhy4_1dAntwortet auf tianshangshandian
I re-read the previous chapter and personally I think what Gohan meant by slacking off was trunks senses has dulled to the point he couldn't sense that someone had came so close to his home.
"Trunks, we can't die so easily, otherwise there will be no warriors to protect the earth. We must work hard to train our bodies and strive to eliminate those two damn androids as soon as possible. When I came back a few days ago, I saw that you were slacking off." - ywhy4_2dKommentiert
this is better cause I feel like the pacing of this fic is too fast and the mc hasn't properly interacted with other characters. For eg most of the training was skipped so we got close to zero conversation between the 3rd class disciples and the mc.
2) Write all important fights - ywhy4_2dAntwortet auf tianshangshandian
oh.. then what did you find wrong in that paragraph
"Trunks, we can't die so easily, otherwise there will be no warriors to protect the earth. We must work hard to train our bodies and strive to eliminate those two damn androids as soon as possible. When I came back a few days ago, I saw that you were slacking off." - ywhy4_2dAntwortet auf tianshangshandian
he slept for 2 days after meeting trunks.
"Trunks, we can't die so easily, otherwise there will be no warriors to protect the earth. We must work hard to train our bodies and strive to eliminate those two damn androids as soon as possible. When I came back a few days ago, I saw that you were slacking off." - ywhy4_2dAntwortet auf GarudaTranslationCh 2 Chapter 2
- ywhy4_2dKommentiert
you know it's gonna be fire when the MC's name is Vergil
Vergil's room was a typical college student's den of organized chaos. Empty energy-drink cans and bottles, snack wrappers, and different pairs of shoes were everywhere. Along with the clutter were Pokémon game cartridges and other memorabilia strewn in every direction. - ywhy4_2dAntwortet auf ywhy4_
it would be fresh start in every world.
"Thank yo-." Just as she wanted to thank Leo, she turned around and found nothing there, except for a small note on the deck.