PurfectoCat
This sexy boi once ruled a realm, mistakenly I ate all the rats which destroyed the realm. Now, in the middle of the abyss, bored out of my mind, I am writing fanfictions. Rejoice, mortals! Nyan~
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PurfectoCat21dKommentiertCh 7 Chapter 5: Unlikely Confederacy- PurfectoCat23dKommentiertCh 6 Chapter 4: Rains of Castamere II
- PurfectoCat24dKommentiertCh 5 Chapter 3: Rains of Castamere I
- PurfectoCat25dKommentiertCh 4 Chapter 2: The Monster and the Flapping Butterfly
- PurfectoCat1mthVerschickt
I liked the way how in the first chapter the MC reincarnated. There was no overdrawn fight scene between OCs that nobody cares about in the first chapter, there was just enough tension to tell us the reader what was going on. There was also no meeting ROB and having an awkward conversation with ROB and getting wishes. It felt nice how the frustration the MC had turned out to be 'wishes' at the end. The idea is pretty interesting, I don't think I've read a story with this power set: Sukuna's power and Azmuth's intelligence. I enjoyed the first chap. The direction you have decided to push the story (Minato, Kushina alive) is something I look forward to read. Thank god it is not one of those 'see how much Naruto suffered in the village' kinda fanfic. Those have become very tiresome to read tbh. The MC also ain't some normal guy from the looks of it and it seems he won't have a hard time adapting to the shinobi world as he seems accustomed to killing. But he has also shown emotions, so he isn't the totally machine-like emotionless killer which is relieving. He wasn't overly emotional though and the way he portrayed his emotion felt real enough for a man of his supposed background. That's all for now. Good luck!
- PurfectoCat1yrAntwortet auf Shadow1609Ch 2 Chapter 3
- PurfectoCat1yrAntwortet auf Leylin_Farlier99
Normal human nature~I don't think someone has died because of you?
Amidst the weight of the guilt that beset him after snuffing out the life of an innocent woman and her unborn child, his very existence began to careen off a precipice. - PurfectoCat1yrAntwortet auf Ethereal062
character development~
Amidst the weight of the guilt that beset him after snuffing out the life of an innocent woman and her unborn child, his very existence began to careen off a precipice. - PurfectoCat1yrAntwortet auf Leylin_Farlier99
bruh...if he doesn't get to the end of things he gon get killed that is what I am saying...that's what I am showing subtly
Matthews, once a man with a mere inkling of determination, now burned with an unwavering fire to bring Agant peace. The Quest assigned to him only served to fuel the flames of his already burning desire. - PurfectoCat1yrAntwortet auf Leylin_Farlier99
haha, I get where you are coming from but hehe just stick around for a few more chapters...
"I know what it's like to feel the weight of guilt, Mr. Turner," the Ancient One replied, her voice low and comforting. "It's a powerful motivator, and can lead us down paths we never thought we'd take. But it's clear to me now that you're driven by something deeper than just your guilt. You want to be a force for good in this world, to make up for your past mistakes and prevent others from suffering the same fate as that poor soul you couldn't save." - PurfectoCat2yrKommentiert
I guess the start is kinda overwhelming but I just didn't want to go through the pain of developing Alex since childhood. I also wanted to have fun while writing, while you can't enjoy the story you write yourself, I want to have fun doing it. So this is how the story starts. As for how long it will go on, I don't know...maybe it will be only about his time in Manchester United or he could get a new start in a different club later on or I might even summarize his time in other clubs later in the story. I don't know...well, I hope you throw some stones and comments so that more people learn about this story.
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