thanks, lowkey forgot about how the surname and first name were switched

Dan the Man

nahh I'm on break for a while due to basketball and exams😭😭 i will probably be back by next week or the week after

I'm basing it off what was said in the light novel

thank you for the review! I edit, and write my chapters myself so for some days I might no upload to do quality checkings or improvements on my previous chapters to ensure enjoyment! but thank you for the encouragement :)

all will be revealed in the future, it won't be fun if you get spoiled right at the beginning would it? :)

thank you for the detailed review! The world building is a bit slow due to me wanting to resolve the relationship between Bell and Hestia to a proper one. Where both can depend on each other, after that I will be sure to pick up the pace a bit :)

Bell is the MC, and the spirit is a person from when they fought without Falna's.

if you don't like it then just drop it, I don't want Bell to grow obnoxiously strong and its only been 6 chapters?

thank you for the review :)

nah ill start again on this work in a month or two

he just like me fr🥱

he has a mana mana fruit so he has unlimited mana to supply every servant so they don't disappear and each one is off to do their own thing now.

spoiler Drake kicked MC off the ship for his own good so he can grow stronger and joined luffys crew. Chiron and some other servants he summoned stayed with Drake whilst others followed him to accompany Luffy - who is genderbent - but I dropped it after that

mm, that borderline spoiler territory depending whether you have read toaru or not

thank you and it's fine things like this are really helpful for me since I'm bound to make mistakes. writing and editing at the same time can be quite stressful so thank you for pointing things out :)

yes, but since it materialised from mana wouldn't it need a certain time to dematerialise as it had already formed? due to the fact that mana solidified the spear in order for it to cause physical damage

touma as the mc

yup, before he had identity crisis

nop, the way I see it mana is fundamentally a whole different concept than Esper powers. Mana is like creating something with elements while Esper power is channeling it inside of you. Thus the reason why mikoto couldn't use her power was because she couldn't channel it. The spear of light was already created nd can't be dissipated unless touched upon although Raynare wouldn't be able to channel mana anymore