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You could think it this way as to why his mother is not helping: Imagine your mom’s very smart. You are a toddler currently and need to be enrolled in school. But, since your mom is really smart, she decides to homeschool you. You don’t lack money, you don’t lack anything, yet you get homeschooled for all your life. How would it feel? Won’t you miss out on a lot of things? Like meeting new friends, getting involved in school drama, doing sports, having competition with your peers, and falling in love. Hope this helps :D
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Ah, you’re right, my apologies for the error
Sounds good
I honestly have an imagine of his hair in mind, but it’s sort of hard to put into words
I think it's the past that's being talked about. Before he went to that new world.
yes
It’s walk
Oh, I forgot about the last line. Sylvia’s like:
Do good, that’s the only way
The statement here is being referred to the past when teens were complaining.
It's not the MC that's uncreative, it's me. I've got a major exam coming up and am unable to juggle properly between studies and writing vsol. Been really busy and my entire focus is on studies, so vsol's taking a brunt of it. In a week at most, I'll be free from my exams and will have enough time to reflect and improve vsol chaoters. Also, I suggest you read ahead till at least Chapter 1030 before dropping. I've done some major improvements in my writing and it would feel easier to read for you. If there's anything you'd like to tell me, feel free to reach out to me on discord. Hope you have a good day and happy reading :D
I appreciate your criticism and am really glad you read this far. Yes, there have been a shift of focus and things seem a bit chaotic and mis-matched. From the start, vsol was all about slice of life and even later in the story, it was all about that. However, around 900-1000 chapter mark, there's some major developments and the plots picking up pace. I personally felt that readers were bored of the slice of life. some even asked me to fasten the plot a bit. hence, I did that. Another important thing was that I was unable to write slice of life for a while. There's been a lack of inspirations, and I felt that I might as well move the plot line instead. Anywho, I appreciate you reading this far, and taking time out to write a review. I have heard your concerns and I'll work into improving my craft as much as possible. If there's anything more you'd like to tell me, please do so on the discord. I hope you have a good day! :D