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I just hope this novel doesn’t flop. I am really putting in the hours and doing my best to learn and adapt. And you did catch the strengths correctly. Sadly, even with good character interactions and stuff, without proper action and adventure or system even, many won’t continue reading

This felt more like a volume end than the actual volume end lmao And I think I should’ve spaced out the chapters because him performing mountain slash got overshadowed xD And I’ve finally taken power system seriously and started mentioning it more If you haven’t figured it out yet, then well, I can tell you, power system and fights are my weak areas and I’m doing my best to work on it, but I still slip at times

Thank you for reading. Are you enjoying the novel so far?

Could be for sure. When I write, I already have the scenes going on in my head and am immersed, so I may sometimes have made the prose more concise than needed. Unfortunately you know, there’s no way of knowing whether something is landing or not until I’ve published it and people have read it. I can’t keep updating old chapters but I can surely keep the learnings in mind and write better ones going forward.

Vivienne meant that losing his memories changes nothing about how she sees Vincent. He’s alive, he’s still her son, and he still knows and loves his family. Everything he forgot can be learned again, so to her, none of that matters compared to simply having Vincent healthy and kicking. She called his name on purpose and then he responded with “mom” It was a short interaction, but basically had a deeper meaning related to what I said above

You know what has actually happened? I’ve lost readers instead because the bloodline isn’t so pure anymore. Can’t win anyone these days

Not really. The nobles benefit indirectly from the merchants under them moving. And the nobles cannot stop the merchants either because we’ve seen before that riots might happen. So the nobles can’t exactly stop them or have enough control

There was, but Vincent hid the notification. An entanglement upgrade at this scene would also feel a bit cheap tbf and would break immersion

His vampire bloodline status is sealed which has resulted in stunted growth. There’s going to be an arc about it soon where the seal is removed and the growth suppression is gone :D