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What beauty does light have if there isn't a glimpse of the dark
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sub increase. in between 0-1, there are 100mili numbers. I don't know the mathematical statement, but it's just like a sub number between the main one. Wait, I will explain more when I do some research, but I hope this explanation helps
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please try reading chapter 3_5. it's where I need reviews the most
you're writing in past tense right? it's supposed to be had* not is* before the king. he had* two wives not has. has is a present continuous. but it depends on the tense being used
turned into the city. (full stop) not comma. you introduced a new sentence so it should end with full stop
It's supposed to be " it didn't take long before these seven elves made their way into the forest, walking deeper in the dark woods. the last sentence seems confusing
on? On is used to describe when an object is placed on something. so it should be in not on
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