Hannah_King_6215
I am an artist who is now diving into the worldly expression of writing, I am hoping to create interesting stories to share, also still learning, honest critique help. Don't be shy with me!
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This is one my favourite things in the world xD Gacha is captivating and always keeps you guessing what will come next and this book is a perfect example of the chaos thaytcan ensue while you play, but this is basically this guys whole life now! The twists and turns were about to engage in sounds like one hell of a game to live xD
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The story is still in its early stages, but the writing quality definitely shows promise towards an interesting and worthwhile narrative that I hope the author continues to build on. It's definitely a shift from the norm on this site, but I think that's a good thing -- it's refreshing and allows itself to standout.
I would say good start, but I would work on the variety of beginning of each sentence you written since I noticed it's either Infinity or *He* or The a long the way I noticed. I think its an interesting story and I can tell you really wanna tell this tale. I wish you luck on your endeavors to make this what you want. Goodluck to you!
Such a fun story xD I been obsessed with these in reality and this story hooks you right from the beginning of it all! I fully recommend it! I love the MC here x//x Please update more authors as this such a fun premise here making want more along the way! Reverse King alone got me interested in what is gonna happen.
Gacha, while being a fun catchy title and badass MC on the cover it's a fun series about Lucas who is down on his luck to the point he thinks he is cursed *Same buddy* to the point he died without any signs of a brain hemorrhage, but he was graced enough to continue his life in another world where he is learning to live again and adapt. I def would suggest this one xD