Toseeb_Qais

Can we have the chapter re-Written with spaces it’s very hard to read.

Don’t @Author I have been where you are trust me even when you feel okay you won’t be, take my advice put your stories on hiatus and just live life for 2 months or more. Grieve properly, cry talk to the fiancée don’t just throw yourself back into this.

Thanks for the spaces. If it’s not too much of an ask could you do this for previous chapters also please 🙏.

The story is all packed together there are no paragraphs makes it hard to read please fix this.

Take longer your mental health is more important DONT worry about the story for now.

I’m looking for info on what the devil fruit is can anyone tell me please.

Have you not heard of paragraphs. So difficult to read.

TF did I just read? This is so hard to understand and stops making sense after a while.

You wrote a good story but come on why does everyone make him join Rias at this point it’s stale and overused. Sorry but I’m dropping.

Thanks for the heads up.