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chiboss050

chiboss050

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2021-10-16 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
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    Love your story. Your fellow author speaking. You are truly talented I need an autograph

    Buried beneath the depths of the ocean lies a hidden universe of mysterious life forms that thrive beneath the waves. The once pitch-black waters were illuminated by an array of phosphorescent creatures glowing in a kaleidoscope of colors.
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    Sin Of Eternity
    Fantasie · Celestial_prince
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Antwortet auf Bhavna_Mudgal

    sorry if the recent uploaded chapters offended you but that was meant to happen in the story

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    PERHAPS MY LIFE COULD BE BETTER
    Urban · chiboss050
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
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    funny lisa

    "I've been wanting to go to Ozora for a long time. Many people say a lot of rich people are here. I hope I meet a rich man who is handsome, and can change my destiny from a farming family." Lisa arrogantly spoke while blowing her freshly cleaned nails.
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    Sweetness Like Apple
    Fantasie · Dabelyu
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Antwortet auf Willhem_Duy

    thanks I will see what I can do about the grammar and breaks thank you once small

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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Kommentiert

    cliche hanging right? I love that

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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
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    like in Jumanji

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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Kommentiert

    I could get bored, two hours is much

    Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Antwortet auf Bhavna_Mudgal

    I will try my best to make It less dramatic Thank you for your review though

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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Kommentiert

    yeah, thank u

    Ch 1 chapter one Trial marriage
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Antwortet auf Galanar

    I don't understand

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    PERHAPS MY LIFE COULD BE BETTER
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Kommentiert

    what a nice story

    Ch 1 1 - The beginning
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    Ashen Sun
    realistisch · Donutsaurio
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
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    what a nice story

    Ch 1 1 - The beginning
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    Ashen Sun
    realistisch · Donutsaurio
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Kommentiert

    what a nice story

    Ch 1 1 - The beginning
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    Ashen Sun
    realistisch · Donutsaurio
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Kommentiert

    what a nice story

    Ch 1 1 - The beginning
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    Ashen Sun
    realistisch · Donutsaurio
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Kommentiert

    i love your work

    Ch 1 Where it all began
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    World End: The Successor's Contract
    Fantasie · Kirito_K5
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
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    i think there's a mistake here

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    World End: The Successor's Contract
    Fantasie · Kirito_K5
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Antwortet auf Kirito_K5

    what happened ?

    When the man looked up from his book and saw Kelly who was half naked, he instantly stood up and went over to the couch and sat.
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Antwortet auf Kirito_K5

    please were in particular

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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Kommentiert

    I love this story but too many paragraphs Looking forward to seeing your novel improve I am still reading it Update more

    Ch 2 Team Leader Kim Rok Soo
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    Team Leader Kim Rok Soo
    Anime und Comics · Revinsane
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  • chiboss050
    chiboss0501yr
    Kommentiert

    keep up the good work author

    Ch 2 Hopeless
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    A Certain Asura Discovers His Origin
    Fantasie · TimeConsumer1
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