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Besides the minor grammar mistakes and many awkward sentence breaks, this story is quite fun to read. I am not usually a fan of romance but this story brings me excitement to read. The main character Kelly is labeled as whore despite being a virgin and Donald her husband labeled as gay for doing girly stuff. The relationship is quite harsh in the first few 10 chapters (except Donald's backstory) is quiet rough and the world background revolves only around Kelly's perspective which makes other characters seem dull and not worth the attention. Worth to read 7.5/10

PERHAPS MY LIFE COULD BE BETTER

chiboss050

Liked it!

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thanks I will see what I can do about the grammar and breaks thank you once small