LordAion

damn, what a ridiculous plot, first, if I'm not mistaken, Hagred raised Cerberus since he was a cub, second, this plot seems to have been written by a Chinese writer.

I noticed that the world announcement for the first legendary class was missing.

very exaggerated reaction just for a preseason performance.

The main problem with this novel is that the author or the translator don't know how to do math, or the translator is changing the events and forgets to correct the numbers and count correctly, at least I remember it being 18 goals and 25 assists.

My heart sank, an innocent old lady, you can see that this character is going to be a real pirate.

firstly, this fanfic changed historical facts without reason, secondly, it creates absurd events that are incompatible with the way of Konoha

Os chineses sempre escrevem da mesma forma, é raro encontrar um que quebra essa bolha deles, mas algumas vezes tem um diamante escondido nas fanfics chinesas.

He remembers what was in the book only when it's convenient for the author, besides a few chapters ago he recognized who Luke really was, how did he forget it in a few days and with his memory tweaked?

So far is good. So far is good.

Holy shit, what a fucking boring chapter, making no sense at all. Man, I almost gave up on this novel, a total waste of time and for no reason, the author must think I'm an idiot.