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  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva15 days ago
    Antwortet auf DevilDaoyst

    He's not strong enough, that's why. It's unrealistic to expect the MC to do exactly what he wants, just because he wants to. This story seems to be a "Weak to Strong", so as long as he isn't strong enough, he will probably follow the canon to take advantage. It's worth remembering that he hopes to be seen as a hero to "escape" from Danzo. This mission on the bridge is exactly what he needs. He prioritized his companions (leaving Obito and Kakashi to rescue Rin, while he continued the mission) and the mission at the same time.

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva15 days ago
    Antwortet auf Anonny_Anonymous

    It wouldn't make sense for him to abandon his companions like that, especially considering that Minato could appear at any time. He completed the mission, that's for sure, but abandoning three comrades like that sounds like betrayal (It's worth remembering that superiors wouldn't come to the conclusion that the MC expected the three of them to escape). Danzo already seems too interesting in him and something like that would be a good opening for him to explore. As long as the MC continues to be seen as a hero, he will have the initiative.

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva21 days ago
    Kommentiert

    I read the entire story until the last chapter released. Honestly, it's a very good idea, but I have the feeling that something is missing. I think that the excessive use of AI to write the chapters takes away a lot of the good things that could have been in the story. There is a lack of “humanization” in the story. For example, the tests that the MC takes to get into Arsenal's school are very intense and unrealistic regarding the condition of the children who are trying to pass. 5-year-olds don't have the physique, much less the maturity, to deal with something so intense. Furthermore, Arsene Wenger would have noticed MC much earlier, as he himself is a coach who likes to use young players. Fabregas for example, if I'm not mistaken, debuted at Arsenal when he was 16 years old.

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva21 days ago
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    ART IS AN EXPLOSION!

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva24 days ago
    Antwortet auf Shiva16draig

    影帝 mtlnovels

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silvaa month ago
    Kommentiert

    This is wrong. Cristiano's value at the time must have been around 12-14 million.

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva2 months ago
    Kommentiert

    I hope he and Michael Jackson become good friends and that he can avoid what happened to MJ. If possible, he would have had relations with the band Queen before Freddie Mercury's eventual death.

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4 months ago
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    One of the few stories where an author has the courage to kill Danzo at the beginning. I just hope it stays like this and he doesn't come back to life out of nowhere.

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva4 months ago
    Kommentiert

    End of season 1?

  • Adelmo_Silva
    Adelmo_Silva5 months ago
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    The original Soldier Boy's uniform is much more attractive and consistent with a military uniform. It would be cool if he used it. The first Captain America uniforms are pretty ugly in my opinion.