Mah_olliva

It's time for MC to think sustainably, he needs land to breed magical animals and magical plants. His dependence on the wizarding market affects his progress, especially since we know that some plants are extinct on the market because of wizards. note: house elves or golems to take care of crops and animals

I think the only defect is the structure of the text, in some parts it is very confusing. Otherwise it's very good, the author manages to explore the potential of potions well and has a very good world development, he knew how to fit franchises like Tomb Raider very well

If he is already warning others about Diddy's parties why doesn't he gather evidence and report them, it seems easier and more correct

Has he ever messed with iron golems? Another thing, has he already tried to do some automatic resource farm?

So the thousands-year-old MC, who has memories of dead Cybertronians and knows the danger of the universe, did nothing in the thousands of years to prepare? Furthermore, he seems to have an existential crisis about his role in the world? like come on man

TFTC

The story is interesting, the only things that bother me are the MC's apparent lack of creativity in using his power (perhaps the author will develop it further) but what bothers me most is the MC's apparent lack of objective, I mean he doesn't he needs to have a grandiose goal or something, but his actions seem disconnected and meaningless, it would be nice to at least know the logic behind these actions

The premise is good, but the chapters seem disconnected, in one he was talking to Stark about his power, and in the next he doesn't return to the subject and talks about how Stane suspects him and wants his help to steal Stark technology. Other than that, MC can copy knowledge/talent from others but doesn't stop to think for 1 second about exposing this. Furthermore, the timeline is confusing, I don't know if it's AU or the author just forgot

Thanks for the chapter, I know you haven't explored countries outside of America yet, but it's worth remembering that in the series it was shown that normal zombies freeze in low temperatures, so possibly countries with more severe climates must have dealt better with the infection