well, I appreciate your review. keep reading and interacting.

I bet this chapter was a tease for what's coming. awesome!

thank you.

that's complimentary.🙏😌

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the aim was to try to get the emotion across, I thought I failed in this chapter.

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perhaps, his ever that should not stop us from the imperfections of the world.

You will notice that throughout the novel Makela is the strongest and toughest.

😊 there's more to come in the next chapter

yes, a reader on WhatsApp said to me that I was using the book to lash out my frustration, he couldn't have been more right. That's the power of fiction. thank you once again for your support.

yes, a reader on WhatsApp said to me that I was using the book to lash out my frustration, he couldn't have been more right. That's the power of fiction. thank you once again for your support.

yes, a reader on WhatsApp said to me that I was using the book to lash out my frustration, he couldn't have been more right. That's the power of fiction. thank you once again for your support.

sometimes, we need to trade places to understand. it was the aim of this chapter

Sometimes can only understand if we trade places, and that is what I was aiming for in this chapter.

oh yes, there's much to explore about Ta-hawa. she started to as an usher to the reader and the MC but thought developing the Kemet Universe, I realised she has more potential, perhaps, even a leading role. 😊

I wasn't thinking about it in terms of genders. As an African and a Mukongo, powerful women have always been and led in our society, Lubaya the Maditau is loosely based on Kimpa Vita and King Mamba, the Emperor of the Nzadi empire is loosely based on Nzinga Mbande.

thank you. your support and feedback is equally amazing

yes as a Mukongo myself, I found only a few written works by the Kongo and the one I found, explain why this is so.

thanks, I'll work on the points you mentioned ASAP