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DaoistTLWODg

DaoistTLWODg

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2021-06-06 BeigetretenIndia
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    DaoistTLWODg2yr
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    I don't know whether I should rate and write review of my own book, but after I updated it, I read it at the end of the day as a reader, to see if it makes sense. There were some mistakes that I noticed as I read, also it needs editing. I will do the same once editing is complete. So far, I am most interested about Real Elder of Light and twins Nano and Rita. Especially the twins were a surprise for me.

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    DaoistTLWODg2yr
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    Ram has one heck of bad luck. Poor guy, the number of people wanting to kill him increasing with each chapter. What do you think?

    Ch 10 Chapter 9: Faction of Hope
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    DaoistTLWODg2yr
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    Reverse time quicker buddy.

    "I know. That's why I said from now onwards I would treat her like one. I cannot change what had already happened. If possible, I would reverse the flow of time so that I would prevent myself from kissing her. Please excuse me for my mistakes. And please help me train so that I could become worthy of Elder of Time," Ram pleaded.
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    DaoistTLWODg2yr
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    All the best buddy.[img=recommend]

    It wasn't supposed to work. But it did. Their hug felt so genuine and heart-warming that Ram wished he could get his girlfriend soon to enjoy the same bliss.
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    DaoistTLWODg2yr
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    I don't think so buddy.

    But staying there means that he might get a chance before he get killed. If he could persuade Chandra, reveal the truth and ask for his forgiveness and also pledge that he would never think or do anything to Sandhya, he might spare him.
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    DaoistTLWODg2yr
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    Because you are dumb? Or ignorant?

    Why hadn't he discovered that someone as beautiful as Sandhya would be taken? Why hadn't he assumed that she might have already been engaged?
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    Why is he imagining being stripped naked during the torture?

    Ram felt his soul leaving him. Images of him stripped naked and tied to a pole, surrounded by various automatic devices resembling gloves, lashes, sword, a long wooden bamboo pole, meanwhile he was standing on a piece of land that burned his legs for few minutes followed by freezing for next few minutes.
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    DaoistTLWODg2yr
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    Man, I loved My love From Star. My second Kdrama that I had watched and liked it a lot.

    It was just like the romantic scene from K-drama; My Love from the Star, and he felt like the cool looking alien, Do Min-joon.
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