Review Detail of DaoistTLWODg in Merged Souls Adventures(Previously Super Time Control System)

I don't know whether I should rate and write review of my own book, but after I updated it, I read it at the end of the day as a reader, to see if it makes sense. There were some mistakes that I noticed as I read, also it needs editing. I will do the same once editing is complete. So far, I am most interested about Real Elder of Light and twins Nano and Rita. Especially the twins were a surprise for me.