Seishi_

Well, I think that the only thing similar to Purge is the exact event, no more other things. I just added that event to start a story. Plot is not just about like Purge. It's completely different. Anyway, thanks for the review.

Story is good and characters are cool. It is easy to imagine and I think that this novel had just came back on updating which is nice. In writing, I wonder why you keep on adding the title and episode on each chapter. It is unnecessary, not gonna lie. So far, it's good. Keep it up.

If I'll be brutally honest here, well, I can't say anything wrong on the story itself as it was on your style. However, as I read, some spaces are double spaced. Also, there are some unnecessary symbols like "—" and "," where you could just end it with a "." I just found your Punctuation Marks Usage as wrong here. Anyway, the story is still good. Keep it up and not the wrong usages.

Somehow, the first two chapters got me confusing, not gonna lie. Overall, the story of this fanfic is great that I read it so fast. I hope that you'll make each chapters longer, so each waiting time is long worth it. I'm just suggesting it. I promise that it will work more. To sum it all, the story and Loki are best. (sorry if my grammar is bad hehe.)

Why seems sus?

This novel is a high quality story. You can feel that it was that great. You'll get hooked up on it by just reading the prologue. The last line in the prologue is the coolest. Keep it up and Good luck on your writing journey!!

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It was kind of fun reading, not gonna lie. There are chapters that are mostly built up with monologues and some are full of dialogues. For me, many commas in a chapter equal good. Overall, your novel has a good start. Keep it up and Good luck on your novel journey!

Hello! I am "Seishi_". I'm the author of this novel, who will give a shameless review on my own novel. This novel is focusing on an 18-year-old teenage man, who was forced to perform a ritual and take its risk so that he can take revenge for the killer and his allies. He will go on an adventure around the world to find each of them. As the novel progresses, we can see the main character's development throughout the story. I'll try to be consistent as possible so that you will not drop and forget this novel of my own. I would like you to support this novel. I'll always be grateful for the things you will do to support me. Thank you and always have a nice day.

hehe nice..