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I think that after Selena, we should stop bringing more people to our hero and focus on their relationships more, and yes, you should give Justin Bieber a slap to teach him that you are far better than him, and try to talk about the shady sides of Hollywood and that you are a person that no one can threaten.
That looks good, but really take care of the family and get rid of the system and keep its old advantages, but dedicate more to Alex and we want to know the family's thoughts about our hero And I suggest you have a dangerous idea to make a big time jump until the hero is of a decent age for more interesting interactions maybe by making him leave for a final system mission where when he comes back all his works will be famous and he won't mention the system again
A wonderful novel, but I was bored with the system, as now I no longer care about the system because it is of no use. After all the work done by our hero, you will have enough money for your whole life. There is no point in continuing with the system and also the interaction between you and the modern family has become very superficial compared to With the first chapters, I think that you should do a radical solution to this issue, such as stopping doing famous works that require a lot of effort compared to a child who gets a famous job in less than a month, it seems impossible, very imaginary and stupid, and thank you for your effort
Why don't you give our hero some of his vampire powers and also for the songs because he sings in each chapter why not keep them only for Marcelin and the main characters and of course you should watch their reactions to the song and the number of daily chapters is not enough and for the powers how will you give it to Marcelin after a thousand years Don't tell me that you will meet Marceline before the start of the series because that will be frustrating and also why don't you make our hero to eliminate all vampires by sending someone to give Marceline those powers and at the same time you create a hideout for you of a moving type like a castle of rocks It consists of science and magic and contains wonderful things from inventions and books and you train in the arts of ice ninja and some purifications of One Piece and finally you go stronger in the whole world and then we meet Marceline after Jake asks for your help to kill a vampire and that will be romantic comedy encounter
Great chapter, what do you think if you tie the hero to a long sleep, and when he wakes up, he is at the beginning of the first episode, and he knows that the one who tied him is the mother company itself? He will keep up with the plot In the best way because the hero is currently very strong and I don't think he will keep up with the plot because he will be bored and also ready, and this will eliminate the element of suspense
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