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Heehaha

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2021-03-25 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Heehaha
    Heehaha1yr
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    Black Helbert full form with energy being poured.

    The monkeys playing immediately looked at him. Seeing him they started trembling. "CaKE CaKe!" All of them screeched more loudly. Clay hunched and started flowing his energy into his spear. One of the fangs produced ethereal waves that solidified into an axe blade. The other fang also produced ethereal waves that solidified into a fatter triangular fang. Weirdly after being solidified the now black helbert was harder to see.
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    Heehaha1yr
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    The Black Helbert without energy.

    As the group of monkeys played and screeched. Clay unsheathed his new weapon—a long black spear with wavy fangs protruding from both sides. When Clay bought this Rank-3 weapon, he was very happy. This weapon is strong and has a very good ability that matched him.
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  • Heehaha
    Heehaha1yr
    Antwortet auf Omar1303

    I try my best to use commas but sometimes I miss it.

    Ch 6 Killers
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  • Heehaha
    Heehaha1yr
    Antwortet auf Omar1303

    He is asking which rank the items will be good in.

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    Heehaha1yr
    Antwortet auf Mattroy1

    Learned a new term thanks to you.

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    Heehaha1yr
    Antwortet auf Maskofgluttony

    Thanks for the feedback. I had been worrying about the pace and depth of the character and the world. This review as given me an idea on how to make my boom better. So thank you.

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  • Heehaha
    Heehaha1yr
    Antwortet auf DrowningBearFish

    Thanks for the feedback. Fixed it.

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  • Heehaha
    Heehaha1yr
    Antwortet auf DrowningBearFish

    None of these two are permanent.

    'Damn 36%. I completely forgot that I am made up of muscles. Of course, I would have a good affinity with it. I thought with leaving behind Arby, this was the perfect time to practice 'Perfect Punch' and this class is perfect for that. If I get into a pickle I will summon the whip to help me out... What! I didn't get anything moved to my natural body...'
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    Heehaha1yr
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    "Wow this is amazing and, also expensive, how did you get this for me." Said Clay as he took the sword in his hand and unsheathed it.
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  • Heehaha
    Heehaha1yr
    Antwortet auf HaracasAye

    Constant

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  • Heehaha
    Heehaha1yr
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    Author’s shameless honest review :) I believe I am a good writer and note taker so their shouldn’t be many mistakes. But if you do find one pls leave a comment saying “found a mistake” no need to even give a reason. I will check it and fix it. The only thing I am worried about is how often I can post. I will try my best to do 1 ch a day. But problems may occur. I am very proud of the world I have created. It will have basic elements you see in system novels. But I dont think that’s bad as basic are basic for a reason. For example I love military arks. I have planned out the major plots of the story and I find it incredibly beautiful. My favorite books are Lord of myteries, Super gene, Castle of black iron,Legendary moonlight sculptor, and Supramcy games. I have taken inspiration from these and hundreds of other books I have read.

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