Criticizing the story over reading just the synopsis and the first chapter does nto justify your distaste towards the story. None of the reviews are fake, they are all people who have read the story and gave their honest review. I am aware of grammar mistakes, but keep in mind my writing style is described like that so it doesn’t over complicate readers and makes it easier to read. I however do appreciate the honesty you put into this review and I am looking for improvements as every author needs it. My writing skills was horrible compared to now, so keep in mind that I am also trying. And the synopsis is a run through, the story starts 5 years into it. So I decided to describe it like that. The demis are an unexplainable concept in this world in which will further be discovered as the series continues. And I never put blame on Japan, read as it describes. In the story most people have no clue it began in Japan, Demis are being blamed by the Hunters in which will become frequent enemies in the future. I decided to stay with Cody and Aya (originally supposed to be Oliver and Kayla), I know Aya is short for another name but its the name I preferred for this character. I relate to Cody and Aya more than Oliver and Kayla, hence why I stuck with the character names. The world building isn’t as necessary due to the apocalypse but I do plan on improving in that specific area. ( And non the less why do you spill out an insult by calling me a weeb for naming a character Aya? That by no means makes me a weeb. That was unnecessary, insult to injury ow lmao. And I don’t use grammarly due to being broke and it won’t correct everything last time I used it. (I even used it for chapter 1 and you are writing one whole review for that specific one)

Oh no my writing and storytelling is different from others; what can I do?! 👹🙌

Who are you to encourage someone to quit a passion they have been doing for half of their life. You seem to be the only one disliking it, I am not going to listen to you.

I’m not going to quit writing over someones opinion.

a horribly written series with little to not grammar. How is this ongoing despite the horrible reviews and how do people even like it? It's the definition of generic and it basically has a useless main character that basically isn't even the main character as he loses every battle despite being teased about how strong he is. Even the most generic battle shounen anime can do better than this piece of lackluster garbage. the author does not know how to write a proper story with proper grammar and they likely have no intention of fixing this. do not waste your time reading this.

Hello, the author here. The story is currently on a massive hiatus due to a mass amount of projects I have this year and next year. The story likely won't return for awhile and that's my fault on that part. However you should be excited for upcoming chapters as I have exciting things that are going to happen in this story. stay safe and keep readin'

Hello everyone, the author is here. I am based LOL. I hope everyone can enjoy this spinoff as it hugely ties in with the main series and can kind off serve as a prequel/spinoff series but it won't be long running. Please once you are done reading season 1 (25 chapters) feel free to write a review and let me know your thoughts as we are 19 chapters away from the season 1 finale. Have a nice day and stay safe! Keep enjoying them books!

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What were yall laughing at? 🤔

Thanks! ^^

For anyone wondering if chapter 90 will come out today then you’re unfortunately in correct. Something came up so I am taking a day off for myself. Chapter 90 shall be released tomorrow!

Tons more 😈

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Finally someone who likes Cody 🥺

Hehe thanjs

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As a friend of Aria’s. I shall be the very very first person to review the story hehehe. FIrst off the story is well written. I can’t say much since it’s just the very beginning of the story. Anyone who has read ZO2014. This is not canon for my storyline as everything is different to my story. So The story is given the OK to read even if you don’t read ZO2014; though there will be similarities between both stories. Good job.

This Book Is pretty good in terms of story line so far. Like manee, Gary is a traitor from what it seems. I am not that far ahead; I am looking forward to read more when I have the time. Stay safe fellow Author!

thanks bro