There is a good work under writing.Keep it blood boiling like you are doing author. A grand masterpiece. Keep going author 🌹 Can't wait to see more from you.

I never regretted adding this book to my library. it's a great book that is highly recommended to all system based fiction. Looking to more Chapters from you.

Nice work so far. Just that the paragraphs appear to long which is not recommendable for most user. Can't wait to see what Orion has in store in the upcoming chapters.

Interesting book with high class grammar yet easy to read. Definitely highly recommended to all readers out there. Can't wait to see more updates.

How bad?

hehehe

A masterpiece in the making. After reading the first chapters. I am engrossed into the book's virtual reality and can't wait to have more of it. Highly recommended

<[ Turn Evil! little girl!]>

<[ INITIATING KILL MODE >

<[ Danger Alert! Save your power stones!]>

ಥ⁠‿⁠ಥ object i guess

The overall storyline is interesting and blood boiling. Highly recommended for all Fantasy readers. it is one of a kind that is definitely worth a try!

Top of the cream! it leaves ones mind blood boiling and looking forward to more. Looking forward to where this journey will take us! Best regards author! we can do it!

The story is fine and promising except for a few mistakes in grammar. I would recommend Grammarly for that since none of us is perfect. The book is worth a try and highly recommended. Keep it up author, you will surely make it.

*he thought to himself...

There is a sudden change in emotions that's abit ironic

Some controversy is plot setting

*only to find out...

The title itself arouses curiosity in the mind of the reader. This already tells us that something action packed is in store. Can't wait to have more from you author!

The synopsis is top of the cream and left my blood boiling. Something tells me that the story will soon strike the rankings as a masterpiece.