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Well I guess I’ll do a realistic review myself though as the author I may be a bit biased. I do think this novel is worth a read to anyone who enjoys Pokemon fanfics. I know it’s not perfect and could definitely be improved in a number of ways but I feel it has been getting better as a imwrite more a more. My punctuation and grammar aren’t perfect but compared to a lot of other novels I feel that it is better than average. I also try to use a wide variety of descriptive words so the story isn’t repetitive and I add pictures of important characters.
I apologize like I said new writer and I do all my own editing I try to make it as grammatically correct as I can but sometimes stuff slips through. But thanks you for the comment I genuinely appreciate it as I want to make this as good a novel as I can hope you stick around and help keep me honest and push me to do better
Thanks for letting me know I corrected it
Pidgeot is his fathers fastest Pokemon but there are other faster Pokemon out there. He is referring to the ability speed boost which like in games raises the Pokémon’s speed in battle. It also has extra effects in this universe in general that hasn’t come up yet as Lucas hasn’t had enough experience with Pokémon’s abilities to realize that this universe is different than the game
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It will be revealed what Pokemon type she specializes in the next chapter
This is an over head view of the battle field
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I mean I know from reading to many comment section that there are a lot of perverted readers lol so plus got to show love to the Og girl in Pokemon. In my head canon where ash actually grows up he and misty end up together
I appreciate it but honestly after it happened I sat down and thought about future team composition and it actually is far better this way especially when you consider the ability and Kolton’s base speed. Just like Mankey has a broken attack this jolteon will probably be one the the fasted pokemon when battling in this universe so he will have 2 mons that have a huge advantage in the future
Honestly yes I agree I was trying to get the ai drawing system i use to find something similar to this but I couldn’t for the life of me get it to draw anything halfway decent